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Yes...that ad is WAY too busy! The copy is too tightly packed and very hard to read. Compounding the problem is that there is redundant information in it taking up unneeded space.

  1. The dates are in it twice.
  2. The word "Prices" is not needed.
  3. "Train Times" is not needed.
  4. The sentence "For more information and to buy tickets online visit -" should simply say, "BUY YOUR TICKETS HERE!" with a link directly to the ticket sales page in the web site. Just like the link in this paragraph.
  5. The actual web address in those big letters is also not needed if you build the "Buy tickets..." link into the ad.
Last edited by Rich Melvin
Originally Posted by OGR Webmaster:

I saw the Leviathan in Owosso several years ago. It is a stunningly beautiful locomotive!

 

Rich,

Wish you and everyone else had been able to see the Leviathan up at the Saratoga & North Creek in New York a few years ago.  Beautiful engine, and seeing that thing up around 30mph or so was something else.  Gives a whole new appreciation to the craftsmanship as opposed to seeing it putzing around at 10mph or so.

Kevin

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