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Just thinking . . . I have probably posted too many long posts on the Forums.

 

We have some readers who want only the high points, while others crave the details.  Anyone familiar with my style of posting will recognize that I am driven by Catholic schooling from nuns who required proper sentence construction; by a desire to continually do things better; by a belief in the need for accuracy; by my personal curiosity and orientation toward full disclosure of details; and by my background in analyzing and reporting on railroad operating matters and then writing instructions that could be clearly understood and leave no loopholes.  That's me, personified - carefully constructed, analytic, sentences, somewhat long and with plenty of punctuation.  It's classic writing of railroad rules and special instructions.

 

If I'm seeking information, I only write one or two sentences.  If I know the answer to a question, though, I often start to write a couple of sentences which turn into two or three paragraphs, because I don't want to generate more questions from the detail-oriented Forumites like me.

 

When we first got voice mail on the Santa Fe phone system, the Company offered seminars with communication experts, and one thing that they stressed was to time voice messages, making 20 seconds the goal, and not exceeding 30 seconds.  The other person could easily call and ask any specific additional detail he wanted.  Internal emails should also be concise or they would not be read. Reports, on the other hand should begin with a summary, and then furnish thorough information (footnoted when required).

 

So, I'm going to try to go against my instincts and post more concisely. Since there is no highlighter function, I'll try using blue text for highlighting to make it easier to make it easier for readers to scan and decide if there's anything of interest to them.

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Either way works for me.

But I will say that there is school and there is the real world.

And there are different styles of writing based upon the document's purpose.

For example, I was taught to write a news article differently than a feature article.

Your company's recommendations for voice mail and internal email matches what was considered to be best practice at my employer.

 

 

Your posting style is just fine with me.  I crave details, and I love to get insight from those that spent their whole career working for the railroad.  It is your input that allows those of us who crave details on railroad operations to incorporate the knowledge that you offer into our model railroading efforts and model railroad operations. 

 

I'd far rather read your posts, which are technically accurate, as opposed to somebody who reads one article in the newspaper and feels he is an instant expert.  There is far too much of that here, and I do my level best to ignore it and not post to it. 

 

Please don't change the information or manner in which you communicate on this forum. 

 

Regards,

Jerry Zeman

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Haha, well, thanks, fellows.  No, I didn't get a nastygram from anyone.  I was just thinking that there's hardly anything as dry as a paragraph on air brakes or railroad rules.  I did not realize that there were many who read my posts.

 

Personally, I think Wyhog has been able to strike the perfect balance to provide good information without being dry or uppity.  So I'll take my ten demerits for not making triple copies (one in pink, for giving a punch if no reply received) and award ten merits to Wyhog, for exceptionally informative posting.

Tom

 

I am always interested in reading your posts, be they long or short.  You, Wyhog, HW, Rich and the others on this forum who have been there and done it help to make this something more than an above average site for toy train and model railroad enthusiasts.

 

Anyone familiar with my style of posting will recognize that I am driven by Catholic schooling from nuns who required proper sentence construction; by a desire to continually do things better; by a belief in the need for accuracy; by my personal curiosity and orientation toward full disclosure of details; and by my background in analyzing and reporting on railroad operating matters and then writing instructions that could be clearly understood and leave no loopholes.

 

That comment made me laugh.  I had just read the "Union Pacific 3985/844 Info" page on facebook.  The tortured syntax caused me to wonder if the poster was a non-native speaker. 

 

Keep in mind some of these parts are from 3985, which wasn't operated on excursions yet under new management due to the corrosive nature the engine had once it was inspected. It was said by the UP the engine DID have plans for excursions however when certain issues were found it was ruled best to wait until it's rebuild.

 

Perhaps the author simply is a younger American who would have benefited from a Dominican or Notre Dame sister teaching his 9th grade English class.

 

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