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Here is the begining of the Polar Express story using the new Streamliner set as the train. As time permits and I can think the story out more, I will be adding more chapters, so stay tuned.

The Polar Express: Journey’s End

By Richard Anderson

December 2015
          1
     Christmas Eve was starting out like every other for the last few years since the Old Man arrived at the home for the elderly. “It’s time for your meds sir”, said the nurse. “Just leave them on the table and I’ll take them when I’m ready”, grumbled the Old Man. “Just make sure you take them this time” The nurse replied. She then added, “Goodnight and Merry Christmas” as she quietly closed the door and left him there in the room in silence, alone. The only light was a small Christmas tree on the little desk he sat at as he turned in his chair to stare back out the window. As a soft snow began to fall, he gazed upon the white covered landscape as the snow glittered in the light of the full moon. The trees were shimmering as if they had lights of their own strung amongst the branches. The houses up and down the street glimmered in their multi colored lights, ready for Santa to arrive to leave Christmas joy for children the following morning. He mumbled to no one in particular, other than the shadows in the room,” I guess God and Santa both forgot me again this year”.
      He has been alone now for the last few years since his wife of 51 years went to be with Jesus and their Son who they lost while deployed overseas many years ago. That’s what he told everyone when asked if he has any family coming to visit, “All up in Heaven now. My Sister is in a home in Upstate New York. Only family I have left. Haven’t been able to see her in years.” Now a days it’s just “My Nurse when she comes to stuff me full of these horse pills.” He thought about the last time he was able to visit her. It saddened him that she didn’t even seem to realize he was in the room with her, or remember who he was. Since he has been in this home, he hasn’t been able to travel to visit anymore. He got letters from the staff telling him how she is doing, other than that; he has had no more contact. The last letter he received was over six months ago to inform him that she succumbed to the Alzheimer’s and if he could make it to the funeral.
     Memories of years and Christmas’s past began to flood his mind as he gazed out the window upon the wintery wonderland before him. One memory came back as clear as if it was only an hour ago. One he hadn’t thought of in, well, seems like forever. When in the middle of the night he was awakened by the sound of clanging steel and a blast of a whistle as a shiny black steam train rolled to a stop in front of his house. He remembered the shock of that as there were no tracks that ran down the middle of the street. But, oh what a ride and what a night he thought he would never forget. Other memories of other Christmas’s flashed through his mind. Times with his family, trips home from college, or when he got leave from a duty station. The first Christmas as a newlywed, thier child's first Christmas and subsequent years all flew by in an instant.
      He got up and went to his night stand, and as he has done every Christmas Eve since that night, he pulled open the drawer and took out a small worn velvet sack. The only thing he owns now other than a few photos and some clothes. He reached inside and pulled out a shiny bell, the first gift of Christmas from that magical night. After 80 some years, it still shined like it was illuminated by some inner light that never extinguishes. Whether through loss of hearing, or just losing faith entirely, he had to strain to hear just the faintest of rings when he put it up to his ear and gave it a slight shake. He carefully put it back inside the bag, then back into its spot in the drawer. He decided to leave the little tree lit tonight as he turned to open the window to let in some of the cold night air.
      He stood at the window for a moment to breath in the fresh air, and from down the street, bells began to ring from the nearby church, celebrating the coming of Christmas day and the birth of a Savior over 2000 years ago. Passages from the book of Luke began to scroll through his mind of the birth of the Baby Jesus as the bells continued their melodic ringing. He stopped going to church after his wife passed, and thought that maybe he should go in the morning for Christmas day service. “That’s if these prison guards will ever let me out,” he chuckled to himself.
      He turned from the window and went to his bed, with a little hope that Santa might visit him one last time tonight. His heart seemed to skip a beat at the thought and he smiled as he mumbled, “Just foolish old wishes from a foolish old man.” Then let out a small chuckle. He laid down and pulled the covers up to his chin. He closed his eyes as Christmas visions began to fill his mind once again. One dream in particular, which he hadn’t dreamed about since childhood, came rolling through his mind’s eye, The Polar Express. He fell asleep upon the instant, never taking his medicine still sitting on the desk.


          2
      Sometime during the night, the Old Man stirred, like being awoken from an unexpected sound, and the subconscious deems it not important and tells you to go back to sleep. He rolled over, adjusted his pillow to fall back into his slumber, when a slight vibration slightly shook the bed. The kind you would feel during a slight earthquake. “We’re not in an earthquake prone area,” he thought. Just as he was about to dismiss it, the vibration began again. It increased in intensity as it seemed the walls themselves would shake themselves down. As he sat bolt up in bed, he was sure the staff would be running the halls to evacuate the residence, but nothing came. No knocks on the door. No alarms blaring. Nothing. Just then an immense bright light shown through the window then begin to angle off.
     A familiar, but oddly different noise began to fill the air. The squeaking of steel wheels upon steel rails, but another sound was mixed in. Instead of the chug chug sound he remembered, a mechanical throbbing filled the air. As the sound got closer, there was a loud blast of an air horn filling the night sky. He made his way to the window as he saw a train begin to make its stop right there in front of the Retirement Home. This was definitely not the Polar Express he rode on. There was no immense black locomotive at the head, bellowing steam as if a living breathing being. At the front was a sleek set of locomotives with rounded noses and a third unit tucked in-between. Behind was a long line of equally sleek, smooth sided passenger cars. From the many windows along the side, their interior lights cast a yellowish glow upon the new fallen snow. The only thing familiar about this train was the off blue color and the dark red stripe that started at the front engine running all the way back to the last car. The Old Man read the name that was emblazoned in large gold lettering along the side of each unit, The Polar Express. The lead engine number board brightly eliminated its number of 1225 while the middle unit was numbered 1223 and the last locomotive was numbered 1224.
     Without changing out of his pajamas, he slipped on his shoes, grabbed his heavy coat and fedora hat then made his way to the door. He paused as something like a far off voice told him to retrieve the bag tucked away in his night stand. He hurried back, pulled the drawer open and put the bag with bell into his zippered coat pocket then made his way back to the door. He stopped to try and hear if anyone was up and about, awakened by the sound of the train stopping in front of the building. Though his hearing was poor now, he didn’t hear anything and quietly turned the knob to his door and cracked it open for a peek. No one was moving about; even the night nurse was asleep at her desk. He pulled the door open and crept out into the hall and made his way to the door that leads to the courtyard beyond. Once outside, he felt the sting of the cold against his face, turning his cheeks and nose a bit red. He pulled his coat tighter as he began to shuffle his way to the train.
     Just then, the door to the first coach car behind the baggage car, swung open as a set of steps swung down from the compartment they were stowed in. First out was an old style railroad lantern casting its glow on the grown below, followed by a tall figure shadowed by the light behind him. He could make out a conductors hat upon the figures head but nothing else. As he moved closer, the figure stepped down from the train and began to approach him. A voice The Old Man has not heard for nearly 80 years, boomed across the yard with the unmistakable nasally trait. “Well.., ya coming?” The Old Man just stammered as he did when he was a child, “wha,wha, where?” The figure came into the full light, revealing it was the train’s conductor. “My God,” the Old Man whispered, “you haven’t aged a day.” “Why to the North Pole, of course,” the conductor replied with the same words he uttered all those years ago. “This is the Polar Express,” he finished as he smiled warmly at the Old Man. He continued, “The thing about trains. It doesn’t matter where they’re going..”, “What matters is getting on,” the Old Man finished. “Exactly!” the Conductor exclaimed. He leaned in towards the Old Man and continued softly, “Santa has not forgotten you, and more importantly, God hasn’t either.” He pulled out his pocket watch, flipped the lid open to look at the time. “Whoa! We have got to get going! We are on a very tight schedule, and I have not been late before, and I’m not going to start tonight!”
     The Conductor turned to head back to the train. He paused, turned and looks at the Old Man still standing motionless in the snow as if in some kind of trance. “Young man, you do not want miss this train. I guarantee that!” The words snapped the Old Man out of his stupor as he asked, “Why do I not want to miss this train?” The Conductor answered back, “Remember when I told you the most real things in the world are the things we can’t see?” “Yes,” the Old Man replied. “Let’s just say that things once hidden out of sight, things you thought you would never see, or see again, people you thought were gone, all will be revealed to you tonight. That is if you chose to climb aboard. This will be the most important and crucial night you will ever know.” The Conductor paused a moment as if in thought, then added, “You trusted me all those years ago. Do you trust me tonight?”
     The Old Man though a moment as curiosity and the need to know what the Conductor was rambling on about things finally being revealed made his decision for him. “Alright,” he said, “I trusted you before, I see no reason now not to trust you again” He grabbed the hand rail and put his foot on the first step to climb aboard when the Conductor stopped him again. “I almost forgot, you must have a ticket to board.” The Old Man looked at him dumbfounded and said somewhat annoyed, “I don’t have a ticket. How could I have a ticket for a train ride I never booked?” The Conductor reached into his jacket and pulled out a ticket then handed it to the Old Man. He looked the ticket over. This wasn’t the same ticket he had the first time he rode the Polar Express. That ticket was gold with a relief of the train that appeared to be coming straight out of the center of the special paper it was printed on. This ticket was silver in color with an image of the new train he was now boarding on the front. On the back two large red letters in a blue oval only read PE.
     The Conductor continued, “This ticket and this journey have already been paid in full, long before you were born. Now we don’t have time to waste. We must get this train moving! There are other stops we have to make before our final leg to the North Pole.” The Conductor moved aside as the Old Man climbed up into the warm coach and into the main cabin filled with seats separated by tables. He wondered what the Conductor meant by his trip being paid in full when he heard the Conductor shout from the door, “All aboard! All aboard the Polar Express! Final destination, the North Pole!”
     The Conductor closed the door, reached for the radio and contacted the Engineer. “We are secure, all ahead to our next destination.” The Old Man took a seat mid-way down as he removed his coat and hat and laid them down on the seat next to him. The familiar sound of air being released from the breaks broke the stillness that settled inside the car. Two long loud blasts from the air horns pierced the night as the lurch of the train shuddered the car while the Engineer began to open the throttle, bringing the diesel engines to life. Thick black smoke rolled from the exhaust stacks and the long train began to creep forward. Moving faster as more power was added. The clickity clack of the wheels rolling on the tracks began to fade into a more rhythmic sound as the train reached its set cruising speed.
     The Old Man was the only passenger in this car as the Conductor walked down the aisle to the rear door. “I must make my rounds and check on the other passengers.” With that, he slid the door open and disappeared into the next car as the door closed behind him, leaving the Old Man there alone. With many questions now running through his mind, and no quick answers that apparently will not be reveled any time soon, he settled back into his seat to watch the night time scenery slip past in the brilliance of the full moon.

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Yep, I'm hooked too! I guess as the old saying goes, there is still some little boy in all us old men!

I remember when seeing the movie for the 1st time, that my mind went back to my folks taking me down to Sears and Roebuck Store in downtown Louisville, to see the Christmas display in their big front windows on Broadway!

I will always remember seeing the Sante Fe AA pulling several silver passenger cars, then there was a big "Hudson" pulling a string of passenger cars on another level.

Then that's when I saw it!!!  The "Red Ryder" BB rifle, that I so wanted. Not unlike the movie my Mom said Santa wouldn't bring me one, as not unlike the movie, I would "shoot my eye out".

Believe it or not, one will never know what, or who, might be the one to give another the spark of "Christmas Spirit". You have done this for me this year, with this adaptation of the Polar Express Story, and Thank You!

+ my oldest son is returning from what I hope is his last, and final tour in Afghanistan with "Special Forces Group" Today!

So you see, Christmas Presents come in all forms!

Merry Christmas to all of you folks that are on this Great Forum.........................................Brandy!  

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Brandy posted:

+ my oldest son is returning from what I hope is his last, and final tour in Afghanistan with "Special Forces Group" Today!

So you see, Christmas Presents come in all forms!

Merry Christmas to all of you folks that are on this Great Forum.........................................Brandy!  

Tell your son Thank You and to you as well for both of your sacrifices.

Here is the next chapter

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     The Old Man was enjoying the rhythmic swaying of the train as the Polar Express rolled on through the night. Just as he was settling in, he felt a change as he heard the squealing of the breaks as they were being applied and the train began slowing to a stop. He turned in his seat pressing his face against the window to see another house outside. Out the front door came a boy, about his age when he first rode the Express. He could faintly hear the Conductor going through his speech; one he must have recited how many thousands of times over who knows how many years. He watched as the boy hesitated a moment, began to back away, and then stop. He continued to look up and down the train as he faintly heard the Conductor tell the boy, “Suite yourself.” The conductor turned to re-board the train when the boy shouted, “Wait!” The Conductor paused then turned back around. He couldn’t hear what was said, but the boy ran up to the steps to climb aboard. The familiar lurch came as the train began to get underway, continuing its long journey.
     The Old man settled back into his seat, when a tune began to play though his mind. A song he only heard once, but slowly coming back to him as if he just heard it. “I’m wishing on a star, and trying to believe. That even though it’s far, He’ll find me Christmas eve….” His thoughts were interrupted when he heard from behind him, “Tickets, Tickets please.” He turned his head to see the Conductor standing behind him with his hole punch in hand. He reached into a pocket on his coat and produced the silver ticket, then handed it to the Conductor. He began to punch away at it with a speed and agility as pieces of the punched out paper flew and fell like snow. When finished, the Conductor handed the freshly punched ticket back to the Old Man. He looked at the partially spelled word, but couldn’t make out what it meant. It just said Eter.
     “At least you didn’t lose it this time,” the Conductor said. “I remember you went through an awful lot of trouble to not only get yours back, but your friends as well. Tell me, did you keep in touch with any of the children who traveled with you that night?” “No,” the Old Man replied. Guilt began to creep into his voice as he finished, “I never got to see or hear from any of them again. You see, my father got a job promotion the following year and we had to move to a new city.” The conductor sat down across the table from him as he continued, “I was sure Santa was not going to be able to find us that Christmas. I must have written a dozen letters that year reminding him that we had moved and not to visit the old house,” the Old Man Chuckled. “Well, he did find you didn’t he?” the Conductor asked. The Old Man nodded his head, “Yes. Yes he did,” he chuckled again, “That was the year he left me my first electric train set. One I had been asking for for a few years. Ran that thing till the motor finally gave out. It sat on my shelf for many years afterward. Not sure what eventually happened to it.” The Old Man turned his head to gaze back out the window when he noticed the Conductor looking at his watch again. “Well, must get ready. One last stop coming up, then it’s on to the North Pole. This one may be a bit difficult to convince to join us. He is older than most of our passengers we usually pick up, but Santa felt he needed one more chance to come along before he grows into adulthood.”
     “What will happen to him if he doesn’t come along?” asked the Old Man. “Hard to tell,” answered the Conductor. “Odds are likely he will grow up into a normal adult like everyone else, thinking Santa Clause is just a child’s story and a myth. Which is fine, I suppose, but they don’t lose the meaning and the magic of Christmas. Of course there is also the slight chance that he will lose the entire meaning of Christmas, the Christmas spirit and why we have Christmas to begin with. A lost soul with no light to shine upon a world that can become dark, hard and full of hate now more often than not. Those are the ones that hurt Santa’s heart the most. The ones who chose to reject the great joy in the story of the first Christmas, and the miracles that followed. “
     As the Conductor began to exit the car, the Old Man got the courage to ask him, “How old are you?” The question stopped the Conductor in mid step, and then turned his head to look back at the man. The only answer he got was a slight smile and a twinkle in the Conductor’s eye before he disappeared back into the next car. The next thing he knew, they were stopping again. He looked out the window at a bleak urban setting. Boarded up buildings lined the streets, while cars in various stages of disrepair and trash littered up and down the boulevard. He could faintly hear dogs barking in the back ground as a siren wailed farther off into the distance.
     From the front door of a dilapidated old townhouse, a young man emerged from the front door and met the Conductor half way. He could see the teen becoming agitated and restless as it appeared to be the Conductor pleading with him. “There must be something special about this one boy if Santa thinks its worth this much time and trouble to keep stopping here,” he muttered to himself. Then the Old Man froze in his seat, as the boy moved into the glow from one of the few remaining working street lights. The Old Man’s eyes began to tear up as he got a good look at the young man standing in the light. “He looks so much like my boy when he was that age,” the Old Man said to himself as he wiped a tear from his eye. He caught himself pleading to the boy through the window, “Come on! Get on! Don’t let this last chance slip away!”
     Then it hit him, He knew exactly what he needed to, but it seemed too late. The Conductor was already on board as he saw the young man hang his head and began to slowly shuffle back to his home. The train lurched once more as it began to pull away to finish its journey. The Old Man didn’t hesitate, it worked the last time when someone decided at the last minute to join them, and it will work again. He quickly looked around the car and found what he was looking for. As quickly as he could move for his age, he reached for the emergency brake and pulled as if his life depended on it. He could see the sparks fly from the wheels reflecting in the window as they slid along the rails bring the train to a sudden stop. He nearly fell over but grabbed the back of the seat, just as the connecting door to the adjoining car flew open.
     The Conductor came rushing in, “What in blazes are you doing!? You know very good and well that I have a very tight time schedule to keep! I don’t have to remind you that that cord is for emergency purposes only!” This time the Old Man didn’t cower or stammer when he spoke. He looked the Conductor in the eye and said, “That boy outside, he, he looked like my boy when he was that age. I know this must sound like ramblings and nonsense from an old man who thinks he’s seeing things, but why wouldn’t he come along? What’s wrong with him? What did he say?” The Conductor’s face softened as he answered, “He said that he was too old now to believe in fairy tales," the conductor spread his arms wide in a sweeping gesture as he continued, "even though this train was sitting right in front of his eyes. He refused to believe it. He has no time for Christmas or Santa. The only thing on his mind is surviving the next day.”     

     The Old Man began to put his coat on and grabbed his hat as he began to move to the door. “This is going to go completely against Polar Express operating procedures, but, let me talk to him. Just for a few minutes. I know this train is fast enough to make up for any lost time I may cause.” The Conductor thought for a moment then shook his head and said, “I don’t see how that will change his mind any. I have tried many times with this one and it is always the same result.” “So you’re just going to give up on him?” the Old Man snapped back. “If anything I experienced on just the one trip I got to take, you never gave up on anyone! Sure you let us get into some hairy predicaments, but you always seemed so sure that things were going to resolve themselves as they should, and that it was a life lesson we were to learn. Well what about the life lesson that boy out there may be learning now? How many people have given up on him in his life? It is quite possible he has nothing left to believe in, because everyone he thought he believed in let him down or left!”
     The Conductor looked back out the window and saw the boy still standing out in the cold, his head hung low. “This life lesson no one can force upon him,” The Conductor said, “He has to accept it of his own free will. Isn’t that what you learned in Church? About free will?” The Conductor straightened back up and turned to face the Old Man once again. “He has to choose to accept. I can only ask him to put a little trust in me and to come along, nothing more.” “Then where is the harm in letting me try?” pleaded the Old Man, “Maybe a little different perspective is what he needs. You said yourself there is a possibility he could be lost the rest of his life. Isn’t it worth the extra time to try and save one? How many others have been lost over the years? Too many to count? Let’s try tonight to not let another make the wrong choice and join the others who were lost. Think of how my life might have turned out if I had not decided to board that night. You seem to be a very intuitive and insightful man. I think you know, and I think you know something is going to happen to that young man outside if someone doesn’t step in to change his path. Why else would Santa have you stop here year after year if something in his future goes terribly wrong?”
     This time the Conductor was the one to slightly bow his head. “Look out the window,” the Old Man continued, “Why is he still standing out there? If he truly didn’t want to come, he would have gone back inside. He is waiting for something, or just maybe someone.” The Conductor raised his head to look back at the Old Man, “You did learn something more than anticipated on your last journey with us.” The Old Man responded, “It’s called life, and living it. When you have lived down here as long as I have, you learn a thing or two. Remember, you were the one who punched believe on my ticket. I felt like I was losing belief in many things tonight sitting in that room, but now, I feel my faith is returning. Faith in many things not seen.” The Conductor put his hand on the Old Man’s shoulder then said, “By all means! Let’s go out and try one more time!”

yardlet6 posted:

That story reminded me of a anime that was made a while ago. Two young cats are on train. They were friends for forever. One noticed the other was all wet. It was found out that he was drowned and wanted his friend to ride with him to heaven.

Never heard of it. I would probably ball my eyes out lol.

Brandy posted:

 

+ my oldest son is returning from what I hope is his last, and final tour in Afghanistan with "Special Forces Group" Today!

So you see, Christmas Presents come in all forms!

Merry Christmas to all of you folks that are on this Great Forum.........................................Brandy! 

A heart felt "thank you" to your son Brandy, and "welcome back home soldier!!!"  GOD BLESS HIM!!!!!

I know just how you feel.  My oldest son returned from Afghanistan last year after completing his last tour of duty as an Apache helicopter pilot and coming under enemy fire on a routine basis over there.  Having him return home alive (and finally out of harm's way) was the best present I've ever received!  

Thank you every one for the kind words and the encouragement. I'm currently in the middle of chapter 4 but slightly stuck right now. I'm by no means a professional writer lol. It's weird that I have the ending pretty much figured out, it's just getting there lol. But, out on the road all day, my mind gets to wander, just need to get off the siding and back on the main line.

RickA posted:

Thank you every one for the kind words and the encouragement. I'm currently in the middle of chapter 4 but slightly stuck right now. I'm by no means a professional writer lol. It's weird that I have the ending pretty much figured out, it's just getting there lol. But, out on the road all day, my mind gets to wander, just need to get off the siding and back on the main line.

Most stories are like that.  You know the beginning and ending.  It's the journey between the 2 that takes the time.

Back atcha Cooper Eastman! A special thanks to your son's service to our great country!!!

I see so many people today, that haven't served this country, and to listen to some of their complaining, about this, that, and the other. They don't have a clue, that if it wasn't for our veterans, they would be doing their complaining in another language, or maybe not at all!

God Bless to your son Cooper......................................................................................Brandy! 

4

     The two men stepped down from the train as the young man was halfway back to the house. “Excuse me,” the Old man said to the boy, “don’t turn and leave just yet.” The boy stopped, turned to look at the two of them saying snidely to the Old Man, “Aren’t you a little old to be riding a kids toy?” The Old Man didn’t skip a beat as he continued, “First off, be more respectful of your elders, and you can drop the tough guy attitude. I’ve dealt with a lot more bigger bad attitudes than yours,” he said sternly. “Now that that is out of the way, what’s your name son?” The young man just looked back and forth between the Old Man and the Conductor as if not really sure what to make of this whole situation.
     “It’s ok young man,’ the Conductor pipped up in a way of encouragement, “He’s here to help me, encourage you, to take a big step and make a decision that could very well change your life for the better.” The boy stood there as if in a contest with the Old Man to see who would blink first. The boy lost, then said, “Fairy tales ain’t going to change things. The only thing that works around here is hard reality. Reality to survive these streets, make enough money to keep some food in the house, pay the rent, keep the lights on.” Then in a mocking tone he continued,” Believing in some fantasy of a Santa Clause that brings toys to all the good girls and boys is just a joke. I ain’t ever seen him, he’s never left anything. Believing in that crap gets you beat to pulp around here.”
     The Old man jumped in, “What about God? Do you believe in him?” Now the boy was getting agitated and snapped back, “God? Really? What kind of God who supposedly is “all love” lets life like you see around here happen? Just another fairy tale and a waste of time!” the boy threw his hands up in the air saying, “Just like now. A waist of my time, I don’t even know why I’m still out here!” The Old Man had a quick answer, “Because you want to know if it is all real. You keep wishing that there is something better, something more than just this street. More than just existing. Every year this train has stopped, you kept coming outside. You listened to the invitation to come aboard, and you stood out here long after the train left, wondering if there is the possibility that there is more. If you didn’t have the curiosity to know, you would have never bothered to come out the first time the Polar Express stopped here.”
     The boy began to hang his head again saying, “How do you know that I stayed out here after the train left?” The Old Man answered, ‘I saw it in your eyes. The hurt, the questions, the struggle you have year after year. Santa saw something in you years ago, and still believes in you. Why do you think the train keeps stopping here every year? Have you ever thought of that? Most children chosen to take this trip only get one maybe two chances to go. So what is the harm in taking this last offered opportunity? What are you afraid of? What have you got to lose?”

     The Old Man left the last question hanging in the air. The boy shook his head as if some internal struggle was ravishing his mind. That is when the Conductor softly spoke up,” You do have nothing to lose if you chose to come along. I understand what thoughts must be running through your mind right now. Should you set aside everything you know to be true and open your mind to a possible truth you never knew existed? Or will you just continue down the same path, always wondering in the back of your mind, that maybe you should have gone, even regretting to not take the chance.” The Old Man then added, “I know this sounds cliché, but the biggest regrets in life are the chances and opportunities not taken. Trust me; I almost made the decision not to go my first time. There was also the possibility, that I would have never gotten a second chance. I have never regretted making that decision that night. I guarantee, you will not regret it either.” The Young Man just seemed to blow it all off as he turned to head back into the house. The Old Man pleaded one last time as tears began to fill his eyes, “Please son, don’t turn away this time.” The boy cut him off saying, “Why do you care if I believe in Santa Clause? What concern of it is yours in what I believe in anyway?”
     The Old Man continued his plea, “Because Christmas is more than just Santa and materialism. Its love, family,” the boy had heard enough snapping, “I have no more time for this,” and slowly continued his way back to the house. “That’s the point!” the Old Man exclaimed as another thought came to him, “There is plenty of time! Time is irrelevant on the Polar Express and at the North Pole..,” The Conductor looked at him oddly as he interrupted, “I beg to differ! I’m am still on a very tight time schedule and..,” The Old Man cut him off turning his head to look at him, ”Oh put a sock in it! I know good and well what time it is!”
     He turned his attention back to the boy leaving the Conductor standing there with his pocket watch and his mouth hanging wide open. “Sometimes he can be a bit stuffy, but he does his job well.” The boy was almost to his front door when the Old Man asked one last time,” Son, right now you can have all the time in world you need,” The boy stopped at the steps leading up to the dilapidated porch, turned his head back saying to the Old Man, “I’m not your son,” hanging his head again, he softly added,  “My name is Tommy.”
     The Old Man extended his hand out saying, “Nice to meet you Tommy.” The boy took his hand in a firm grasp and a slight shake as the Old Man nodded his head and a broad smile came upon his face, “What do you say? Let’s go have an adventure. You never know what you may experience or learn with a ride on the Polar Express.” Tommy let go of his hand and replied, “What if I do go, and nothing changes? What if I still don’t believe?” The Old Man was quick with a reply, almost as if he anticipated the question, “ah, I know, seeing is believing, and believing is seeing. I think you will find all the proof you need tonight. All you have to do is come along.”
     Tommy stood there a moment more watching the Old Man then finally said, “Alright, my last chance right?” He looked up and down the street as if looking for someone to jump out from behind the bushes to bully him for getting on the train. When no such opposition appeared, he then added, “Alright! Let’s go!” and with that, the Polar Express gained Her last passenger for the night. “Nothing like waiting till the last second,” the Conductor quipped as they all approached the boarding steps. “Just one thing Young Man, You must have a ticket to board” Tommy looked confusingly at the Old Man then the Conductor saying, “But I don’t have a ticket. How could I have one..,” The Conductor cut him off in mid-sentence as he pulled one last silver ticket from his jacket pocket and handed it to Tommy finishing off with, “All Aboard! All Aboard the Polar Express! Final destination,” as he leaned down to Tommy, “The North Pole,” he finished with a smile. The three went inside as the Conductor secured the door and signaled the Engineer to get underway.

5
     The Polar Express made its way into the night; a light snow once again began to fall upon the earth to blanket the ground in a glimmering white under the light of the full moon. The snow sparkled as if all the stars in heaven decided to rest themselves upon the ground, and slumber for the night. The train was well out of any urban areas and deep into the wilderness. Pines covered in snow, branches drooping from the weight, stood like sentinels along each side of the track, glowing in a brilliant white as the headlight from the lead locomotive cast its light upon them, then receded back into shadow as the train passed.
     Tommy and the Old Man settled into their seats, when a familiar announcement to the Old Man came over the intercom. It was the Conductor announcing, “Is there anyone on the Polar Express in need of refreshment?’ This brought a smile to the Old Man’s face. Tommy asked, “Why are you smiling like that.” “Because,” the Old Man began, “If they are offering what I think it is, it is the best hot chocolate you will ever have. And it can’t be duplicated. I tried for years to get the blend right and it never came out.” The Conductor finished his announcement by adding, “Then please make your way to the dining car.”
     “Well,” the Old Man asked Tommy, “Want to see what they have to offer?” Tommy smiled again for the second time tonight saying, “Sure. I could use something to eat.” The two got up and headed to the door connecting the cars. They passed into another coach, then on into a fancier lounge car with stairs leading up to a domed top. Just beyond the next door, they could hear the muffled laughter of children that turned into a loud noise as they entered into the dining car. There were a dozen children of various ages all trying to talk above each other, laughing at anything that seemed to amuse them. The Conductor emerged from the rear of the car urging the children to settle down and take their seats at the various dining tables lined along each side of the center aisle.
     The children began to disperse into their seats when they noticed Tommy and the Old Man walk down the aisle to take a table midway down the car. The children immediately quieted down and began to stare at the two. This was making Tommy feel a bit uncomfortable and self-conscious. The only noise inside was the sound of the wheels rolling along the tracks as the children continued to look quizzically upon the two. Tommy whispered to the Old Man, “Why are they staring at us like that? Creeping me out some.” The Old Man thought for a moment before replying, “Well, you did say so yourself a while ago that this was a kids fairy tale. They probably didn’t expect to see a young man and a senior citizen along for the ride.”
     Just then the Conductor Passed by their table and spoke to the children, “Do not be alarmed. These two gentlemen here are special guests for a very important mission for Santa.” The Conductor turned his head to wink at the two as the children began to excitedly talk amongst themselves about what these two could be doing for Santa. The ideas ran from Railroad Inspectors from one of the older children to wild conspiracy theories that the two were Secret Service Agents and part of Santa’s Intelligence Division collecting information on each of them.
     The two smiled at each other as they overheard the stories the children were coming up with when Tommy spoke softly to the Old Man, “These kids have been watching to many James Bond movies or something.” No sooner had he got that out, one of the middle aged children was overheard saying his Dad worked for The Department of Homeland Security, as another child said his parents worked for CSX Railroad, and that the CSX Santa merger was real. That CSX helped Santa haul the toys around the country to staging areas so that Santa could refill his bag. Tommy was beginning to laugh to himself just as the dining car crew emerged from the kitchen with very ornately plated serving carts.
     The first group began setting the tables, laying blue place mats with a deep red boarder and a large painting of the Polar Express in the middle, and Polar Express in large gold letters above the train. Next were white napkins wrapped around gold utensils and a gold metal ring with the letters PE engraved on a plate affixed to the ring. Next were the porcelain cups and saucers with the PE emblem in gold relief set in front of each diner. While the servers moved on towards the front of the dining car, the Conductor stood at the front with a big smile on his upon his face. Pleased with the quick and professional service being offered to the riders as each task was completed.
     Next were the waiters who came dancing, twirling and jumping as they placed a menu in front of each passenger. This gleeful display continued as they made their way back to the kitchen area to begin the rounds of collecting the children’s orders. Tommy and the Old Man opened their menus to see a cornucopia of delicacies, from cupcakes and pastries to puddings and other sweet treats that could put any normal person into a diabetic coma. “No real food?” Tommy asked. “Turn to the next page,” said the Old Man. The next part of the menu had listings for the more discreet eater and for passengers a bit older as well. Things from pasta dishes to sirloin steak graced the pages.
     Tommy’s mouth began to water as he looked at the meals offered and said to the Old Man, “This sure beats TV dinners and Roman Soup. I’m not even sure what I want.” The Old Man looked up from his menu saying, “I’m going for the steak dinner. We don’t get anything but a mush that is almost like a paste at the Retirement Home. Most of the residences there no longer have teeth to chew with, so the food selection there reflects that.” Tommy nodded his head to the halfhearted joke and made his selection. As if the waiters could read his mind, one was at the table ready to take their order. He first looked at the Old Man and asked, “What would you like sir?” The Old Man looked up and replied, “I’ll have the sirloin dinner, medium, with mashed potatoes and gravy and corn.” “Very good sir,” as the waiter looked to Tommy, “And you sir?” Tommy as well looked up at the waiter and said, “I’ll have the Lasagna please.” “Excellent choice,” and with that he was gone.
      They heard the other waiters taking the children’s orders and imagining that they all will have tooth decay by the time they get to the North Pole. After the waiters were gone, the next crew arrived with a large cart with what looked like a highly polished chrome, high tech coffee maker. They proceeded down the aisle expertly shooting hot Chocolate into every cup on each table. Not one drop spilled out of any cup, or dribbled on to the tables. The Old Man watched in amazement as he remembered he watched the exact same thing on his first trip. This time though, there wasn’t the song and dance number that was performed by the serving crew. Instead, Christmas Carrols were coming from speakers mounted in the ceiling panels.
     The children began singing along as they were waiting for their food to arrive and sipping from their cups. The Old Man sat back taking it all in when he noticed Tommy, staring out the window, softly started to sing along as well. The Old Man didn’t let on that he noticed, but Tommy had a pretty fair voice, not Frank Sinatra or Dean Martin quality, but it didn’t make his ears bleed either. Moments later, the waiters arrived with everyone’s meals, and the singing stopped as everyone dug in. Comments could be heard up and down the car that this was the best cake, the best pie that they had ever eaten.
     The Old Man cut into his steak and took a bite. The seasonings and flavor exploded in his mouth as he marveled at how tender the meat was. Tommy appeared to be enjoying his meal as he looked like a steam shovel, eating like he hasn’t had a decent cooked meal in weeks. They finished the meal off with a toast proposed by the Old Man as they began to indulge in the Hot Chocolate, “To dreams coming true, and that you find what you have secretly been searching for.” They raised their cups and took a sip. The look on Tommy’s face said it all. “The Old Man was right,” Tommy thought to himself, “This is the beat tasting Hot Chocolate I’ve ever had.”
     With dinner finished, the crew returned, and just as quickly as the placements had been set up, the tables were cleared and cleaned, as the children began to yawn in a sudden drowsiness. The Conductor just seemed to reappear from out of nowhere saying to the children, “I believe it appears some of you might require a nap.” The children began nodding their heads in agreement. “Very well then, follow me to the next car. There you will find individual rooms for each of you. I know you want to be nice and rested when we arrive to meet Santa.”
     The Conductor began to lead the children out of the dining car when he paused and looked at the two remaining occupants. “Would you two also like to take this time to rest up before arriving?” Tommy looked at the Old Man saying, “I’m not really tired.” Neither am I,” the Old Man said back. He turned to address the Conductor, “We’re not tired. Think we’ll just sit up and enjoy the ride.” The Conductor didn’t say a word, but turned back to the door and led the children into the sleeper car. Tommy then said, “I would like to see the rest of the train though.” The Old man got up out of his seat and looked down at Tommy, “Let’s see what else we find on board.”

Thanks for sharing.   I praised chapters 1-3.   Chapters 4&5 depart from a whimsical fairy-tale with insight and redemption, into a tale about modern societal and political woes.   Not many folks are interested in or open to those kinds of "beat you over the head" messages.

Steak on the Polar Express?   Your story has left the world of fantasy and holiday daydreams, and has strayed into a more realistic (and boring) train ride narrative.  

Perhaps you can make it all work with something I cannot anticipate.   Anyway, thanks for sharing with us, and I do hope my observations are not harsh, I mean well and in the hope the earlier feeling can be resurrected.   

Great reading waiting for more. Story is interesting as the Polar Express has grown up along with the characters.
The book was published in 1985 and the movie was release in 2004, so there are a lot of adult and young adults that would appreciate your story, thus relating the original story to their children.
Every time a chapter shows up I open it up and read it.
Thank you again for putting this out.

I have always thought of children's stories and what would happen to the same characters once they were adults. Frosty the Snowman always stuck in my mind, what would the kids have done as adults had Frosty really came back like he said he would, all those years ago?

I really like this so far, as it's clearly along those lines.

I realize the story has taken a more adult feel to it, especially with Tommy. Not beating anyone over the head with social woes or what not. I'm probably at the hardest part to get to the end. I thought the menu change would be nice since this trip has more than just kids on it. The last chapter was a bit hard to write, still not sure how I feel about it. I might tweak it some or re write part of it. If I do, I'll post it up and let you readers decide which one you like better. As for the next part, I may need help on techno-babble and how trains actually run, as I have an idea that will go way beyond the train sliding and running on ice . The fairy tale kid aspect isn't gone, just have a segment with Tommy to give a back story that will tie into the ending.  Thanks for continuing to read the chapters. writing this out is turning out a bit harder than I thought it would, considering I've had this story idea banging around in my head for months now.

RICA,  Great job keep the chapters coming.  Keep in mind that even Shakespeare and Mark Twain had critiques in their day and they are revered today for their literately works.  So keep your head up and do the best that you can.  You have to have a lot of imagination to pull something like this off and thus far the story line is just fine.  So what if it delves away a bit from time to time from the "original" fairy tale script that's what great story tellers do!  Think about all of the great stories that have been passed down through the ages that were only orally retained until they at some point in history they were finally recorded.  I'm certain their original storyline was much different with only the heart/essence of the story being retained.

Apologies for not having anything up sooner. 14 days now without a day off. Here is Chapter 6, Chapter 7 is already in the works.

6
     The two made their way out of the dining car following the children, being sure not to wake them from their slumber. They passed through into another dome car that was even more elaborate than the first. Ornate carvings and decorations of Santa as he has appeared in print and picture throughout the years lined the walls above the windows. There were modern conveniences such as game tables, arcade games and pinball machines for the children to entertain themselves with on the journey. Tommy stopped at one game to play a quick round, and then the two climbed the spiral stair case to the upper level and marveled at the view from the glass dome above them. The light snow streaked past the windows in such a blur, it seemed to make the world look like it was nothing more than a shaken snow globe.
     Mixed in between the seating were, what looked like hand carved book cases, with books galore. From Little Golden Book readers to one in particular that caught the Old Man’s attention. He reached down and pulled the leather bound volume from the shelf, the cover was warn as were the edges of the paper when he opened to the first page and caught himself beginning to read, “Marley was dead, to begin with. There is no doubt whatever about that. The register of his burial,” He didn’t even realize he was reading aloud until Tommy interrupted him from the other side, “What did you say?”
     The Old Man caught himself short and stammered, “Ah, Oh, this,” as he turned to see Tommy coming over to stand next to him. He turned back to the copyright page at the beginning and read aloud, “A Christmas Carol in Prose, Being a Ghost Story of Christmas. Written by Charles Dickens, published by Chapman Hall,” then he froze. “What? What is it?’ Tommy asked a little more excitedly than he had realized. The Old Man continued, “Published 19 December 1843, first printing, first draft.” He carefully turned the pages with the drab olive color like if he had turned them a fraction of an ounce greater in force, the book would dissolve into dust. Together they quickly and carefully skimmed the pages examining the illustrations with in.
     The Old Man carefully placed the book back into its spot on the shelf feeling like he had just found the Ark of the Covenant. He looked at Tommy saying, “This was my favorite story growing up. I didn’t realize there was any of the original first couple of prints left. You see Dickens didn’t care for the Olive color on the ends of the pages, so the publisher stopped production and changed the paper to yellow ends. Two more revisions were done before the book was officially published and released to the public.” Tommy looked at him oddly asking, “How do you know so much about this book?” The old Man grinned then replied, “After I retired from the Air Force, I took a job as a teacher of classic literature. Government offered a tuition bill, so I went to college part time, got two degrees one a major in English and American literature. Give me something to do after my stint was up.”
     Tommy seemed amazed when asked, “Wow. What did you do there? Did you fly fighters?” The Old Man motioned Tommy to move along as they headed for the second stairwell, making their way back down to the lower level, he answered, “I was Air Force Security. Basically a Military cop” “Awesome,” was all Tommy could come up with. Now that it seemed The Old Man had a feeling that he had gotten Tommy to open up a bit, he decided to ask the question that had been bugging at him all night.
They stopped at the door to enter into the next car and the Old Man turned to Tommy and blurted out, “What happened, Tommy?”       Tommy was kind of taken aback by the vague and blunt question, “What do you mean?” “What happened that made you,” The old Man thought his next words carefully then started over, “Why did you stop believing in Christmas, Santa and everything?” Tommy turned his head away staring at the door. He pushed the door aside and went into the last car without saying a word.
     The Old Man followed and just barley stopped in time to keep from colliding with Tommy. This was the observation car. The Old Man looked in disbelief as he saw what was displayed before him. It was his living room from his old house just as it was the night he rode the Polar Express. “My God!” he exclaimed, “Tommy, do you see what I’m seeing?” The Old Man looked over at Tommy and saw him just as wide eyed. “Its, Its my home. Right after we moved in. Dad had his new job, doing well, just before it all happened.”
Just in that instant, the two different interiors that each of them saw, returned to the interior of a railcar. Seats and tables, all in the Polar Express decorum, and at the far end, right in the middle of the wrap around window, The brightest lit Christmas tree either one had ever seen. Oh, what a marvelous sight to behold. The lights the shimmering tinsel, and the ornaments, that seemed to emit a glow, from some unknown internal power source. One that the best scientists could spend years trying to figure out, and never come up with a reasonable answer.
     There was no need for any other interior lighting, as the glow from that one tree at the end of the car seemed to fill every nook and cranny, chasing away any hint of a shadow. The light, not overpowering in any sort of way, seemed to have a warm feel to their faces as they stared in awe at the tree. They collected enough of themselves to move their feet and slowly walk to the end of the car. There were large cushion lounge chairs on each side of the tree with a small table mounted to the wall under the big pane windows for travelers to set drinks or what not upon them for the rider’s convenience.
     They each took a seat, and continued to stare in abject wonder at how such a tree could emit that much light, but not blind or hurt the eyes. There was one ornament in particular, that caught the Old Man’s eye. It was located on a lower branch, more toward the back near the center pane window. It flashed in such a peculiar pattern, as if trying to get his attention. The Old Man leaned forward in his seat, trying to get a better look at it. Just then it seemed that the ornament almost moved of its own accord, as if taunting him to follow it.
     The Old Man sat there puzzled for a moment, and then slowly got out of his chair. His knees and back hurt more than normal, although he has done more walking and moving around tonight than he has done in weeks. So with effort and a grimace to his face to fight away the rejection his joints were now beginning to protest, he knelt down on the floor by the tree and caught sight of the fleeting ball. He leaned in closer then seemed to be frozen in place where he knelt. He didn’t dare blink, afraid he will miss something in the flashing pattern that began to spin faster.
     A kaleidoscope of color danced before his eyes. Just as quickly as it began, it let off a tremendous flash, and then returned back to the steady glow by which it started. In a twinkling of an eye, the entire light show lasted. For the Old Man, it seemed like he was frozen in place for minutes? Perhaps longer? He cast a glance around the tree to see Tommy still in his seat, half watching the tree, half gazing out the window, just as he was when the Old Man knelt down to the floor.
     The Old Man was still confused and in a bit of denial as to what he had just witnessed. He began to ponder what the meaning of all this was, when he decided he better get back into the chair before his ageing joints go into revolt from being in a crouched position for so long. Without thought or hesitation, he found himself in a fully erect position minus the cracking bones and the shooting pain that would run up his back from such an endeavor. He sat back down with ease and tried to remember the last time he was able to move as freely as he had just then, then turned his gaze from the tree to the scene outside.
     The scenery flashed by the window, then seemed to pause a moment to regain focus, then fall away just as quickly as if he was watching time itself recede from this moment into the past. Never to be encountered or seen again. Farther out, everything seemed to just stand still, motionless, as if time had no meaning here, as if he were looking into a photograph that was hanging a few feet off the back of the train. Time. Something began formulating in the back of his mind when he was startled by Tommy speaking to him. “You wanted to know what happened.”
     The Old Man snapped back to the present, “Oh, yes. Yes! What changed you?” Tommy stared at the tree with a blank look on his face. “When we came in, I saw my house as it was, our first Christmas there. It was a nice neighborhood. Most of the families there worked at the plant nearby. My Mom and Dad where just nuts over Christmas, and this was the first year we could afford to go all out. Even before that, my parents had this, explainable magical touch for Christmas. They seemed to radiate magic and joy and love. Every year as I got older, it got better and better. It wasn’t the gifts; it was the spirit they shared.” Tears began to fall from Tommy’s eyes as he could no longer hold in the emotion and the anger he carried around now for years.
     “Things were perfect, you know? Dad enjoyed his job, Mom got to stay home and care for the house, and then it all went away.” He hung his head, unable to hide the embarrassment of his flow of emotion, especially in front of a complete stranger. The Old Man sat patiently, not wanting to push the Young Man, for he may clam up and no longer feel comfortable enough to speak. The Old Man’s patients paid out when Tommy collected himself enough to finish his story.
     “A few years later, Dad lost his job when the plant closed and moved overseas. Both of them took whatever jobs they could get. Then Mom got sick. Real bad, some kind of cancer, I think my dad said. She passed away four years ago. My Dad was never the same again. I think whatever magic and love he had, went with my Mom. All that mattered now was how much he could work. When I was old enough, my Dad pulled me out of school to work with him. He said ‘you don’t need your head filled with all those lies’.”
     Tommy continued, “That year we lost her, I wrote to Santa asking for one thing. I figured I wasn’t getting through to God, so I thought maybe Santa could ask him for me.” The Old man waited a moment for Tommy to continue, but when nothing more came forth, he asked softly, “What was it you asked for?” At that, Tommy lost all control, sobbing like he hadn’t done since his Mom’s funeral. “For God to bring my Mom back and make our family whole again,” Tommy began to bring himself under control continuing, “I want my Father back. Anymore he acts like I don’t even exist except for when he wants someone to yell at.”
     Tommy began wiping his eyes, “My Dad would whoop my butt if he saw me crying like this, especially in front of a total stranger.” Mimicking his dad once more, he added,” ‘Crying is for babies and wussies’, he would tell me.” Tommy turned his head to look out the window, silent, unmoving and solitary. The Old Man sat and watched him, figuring Tommy would continue when he felt ready. After what seemed like an hour passed, but only minutes in reality, Tommy finished, “That was the Christmas I knew everything was a lie. Santa, God, magic, love, all of it. I gave it up for the reality I could see in front of me.”
     The Old Man just sat there in silence with the boy but adding one more thing, “You know, your Dad is most likely hurting as much as you are.” Tommy snapped his head back around finishing the conversation, “He sure has a funny way of showing it then,” as Tommy turned to face the window once more. There was nothing he could say; nothing he could do to begin to comfort the Young Man. Tommy not only suffered from a broken heart, he suffered a broken spirit, so shattered that it was going to take an absolute miracle to begin the healing. “Maybe, just maybe, that is why I’m here?” thought the Old Man, “I got him to come along, now what do I do?” He turned his gaze out the window again as many more questions rather than answers arose in his mind, and tried to think as the Train began its journey into the mountains.

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