I think the long elevated track leading into a tunnel is an excellent scenic effect. It creates more work for you but could be worth it.
Tom, I am coming to agree with you: the scenic effects will be cool, and I hope, worth it. I am also liking the road running through a cleft in the mountains on the right. I think that will look good and interesting, and with a surprise: that the road also crosses the hidden track, with trains occasionally flashing through the gap.
The weak part of the design remains the three hidden turnouts, and the long run of hidden tracks at the top. I have no concerns about the front turnout, it is close and easily reachable, AND I plan to have a "drape" of black cloth that covers the face of the mountain, and I will just pull back the drape for operating sessions when I want to verify the position of the turnout points.
I am thinking of using a camera inside the hidden trackage at the top of the layout, at the upper right. Pointed so that I can see the turnout indicators and the position of the points, and pointing down the long hidden staging tracks. To display the image, I am thinking of a small screen mounted above on the upper right mountain and tunnel, camouflaged to look like a billboard. So I can just look at the billboard to see what is happening beneath. Maybe I can toggle between the hidden trackage camera and a variety of traditional billboard images. Just ideas at present, but I have used a small micro-camera before to view trains.